AnalogByNature's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Killing Spree VII]

a heap of copyright music, and yet we have an audio portal with not-often used composers. Only docked one star off for that matter. Some good, but very basic 3D camerawork.
Stick based stuff used to interest me, not so much anymore. Hard to say why I didn't really like this as much as I could have; I think due to the teenage angsty approach. The soundtrack kind of says it all.

[Super Mario Parody]

Reminds me of the oldschool flash days. So that part was nice for me.
You should have credited the music artists name, though.
Not hating, just sayin.

[Super Speed]

Not a terrible first animation!
What I liked best, was you had a decent joke, and got right to the point.
The parts to work on, are obviously extra frames of animation, the artwork itself, and environment.
Extra frames would help your characters seem less stuck in the 'prone' position, with only their moving parts showing life.
To help this not be so noticeable, you could draw an extra frame or two for his body, even if his body isn't going to move at all as he's talking, and cycle between those 3 frames, so his lineart wiggles a bit, giving a non-artificial, subtle movement to his demeanor. It just works.
Hopefully you carry on the clever humour with your progressing flash works. Keep it up! :)

sketchysketchist responds:

Holy balls, that's brilliant.
I never thought of that, I just decided to keep the non-moving parts still because it's what I see in a lot of cartoons.
Thank you very much, I'll try it with my next animation and try to improve my art style and try to make the background look good when I can.

[Awkward Avengers]

Hulk what?
pat?
Needed to be much longer, considering there wasn't a great amount of detail thrown in. Also, with great length, comes comedic responsibility - so, more jokes. Preferably funny ones, but not a must. You should be able to coherently hear your voice actors, though.
Had no Idea what the Hulk was blabbering on about, and he only said two words. Not good.

ciaomeow responds:

Sorry man, Hulk says "pash" which is like Aussie slang for kiss. Honestly was just my first animation ever and just created spare of the moment at like 2am so i guess that would explain the stupidity of it. Thanks for commenting though. Any advice is appreciated.

[Battleship Cathy]

Holy abused animals, this is GREAT! Unlike abused animals.

[Epic Minequest 4]

Top-tier animation here!
I hate Minecraft, but this was savagely awesome, well written, acted, and the animation was superb.
The top NG animations should be of this calibur.
Puts everything done by egoraptor to shame.

SamGreen responds:

Oh wowwwwwwwww made me feel all fuzzy inside <3

[Bryan Singer]

A+
Glad you came back with some new stuff!
Ignore all the peasants below complaining of shortness. It's all in how you use it, and you hit my G-spot.
(giggle spot)

[Una fiesta gratis]

Even though I didn't understand the language, I love women.
I love accents.
But mostly I love women.
Oh yeah, the animation was alright. That one chick had all sorts of frames, where the others didn't. I'm not sure how or why that happened, but I love women and accents.

[Mutatoons Spot 1 "tarde"]

Top tier stuff, right here.
And a promotional spot of all things to match it! Uber-great!

[Deadly Space Action Mini]

Not my kind of stuff; animation style & the humor, but this is very AAA quality, TV-ready material.
Very good job to all those involved with this. Don't get discouraged for my distaste in it. It's not bad at all - I'm just a picky old bugger, but this is truly great.
The only thing I could really think of, if you really *had* to perfect upon your series, is more length to the animation itself, perhaps pace the jokes from each other, so it's not pun after pun, and lastly, avoid relying strongly upon currently popular memes, or pop culture references. It's good to have them now and again, this one felt a bit heavy on most current internetery, although this episode gets off the hook for said complaint - as it's internet-based.
All of the above complaints don't affect it, even if you followed said advice. It really is a good, complete, and tidy package you could easily sell to a network.
If you took a child cartoon approach, I bet you'd get bought up by a provider instantly. The look is very on par with Johnny Test , etc. Kudos!