AnalogByNature's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Super Speed]

Not a terrible first animation!
What I liked best, was you had a decent joke, and got right to the point.
The parts to work on, are obviously extra frames of animation, the artwork itself, and environment.
Extra frames would help your characters seem less stuck in the 'prone' position, with only their moving parts showing life.
To help this not be so noticeable, you could draw an extra frame or two for his body, even if his body isn't going to move at all as he's talking, and cycle between those 3 frames, so his lineart wiggles a bit, giving a non-artificial, subtle movement to his demeanor. It just works.
Hopefully you carry on the clever humour with your progressing flash works. Keep it up! :)

sketchysketchist responds:

Holy balls, that's brilliant.
I never thought of that, I just decided to keep the non-moving parts still because it's what I see in a lot of cartoons.
Thank you very much, I'll try it with my next animation and try to improve my art style and try to make the background look good when I can.

[Awkward Avengers]

Hulk what?
pat?
Needed to be much longer, considering there wasn't a great amount of detail thrown in. Also, with great length, comes comedic responsibility - so, more jokes. Preferably funny ones, but not a must. You should be able to coherently hear your voice actors, though.
Had no Idea what the Hulk was blabbering on about, and he only said two words. Not good.

ciaomeow responds:

Sorry man, Hulk says "pash" which is like Aussie slang for kiss. Honestly was just my first animation ever and just created spare of the moment at like 2am so i guess that would explain the stupidity of it. Thanks for commenting though. Any advice is appreciated.

[Epic Minequest 4]

Top-tier animation here!
I hate Minecraft, but this was savagely awesome, well written, acted, and the animation was superb.
The top NG animations should be of this calibur.
Puts everything done by egoraptor to shame.

SamGreen responds:

Oh wowwwwwwwww made me feel all fuzzy inside <3

[Greener Grass]

Great dynamics here.
The only thing I'd perfect, would be the keyframes. The movements show a lack of controlled inbetweens. It's a great animated short, though. So if those complaints weren't there, this would be AA stuff. It's pretty darn good, Steve! Near perfecto.
Apply at the big studios. I'm sure you could wrangle something up.

SteveRoberts responds:

Thanks a lot! I would have liked to have spent more time on the animation, but time constraints meant I didn't have much time for refinement. :/ Had problems with the rigging stage, so it gave me a couple of weeks less than i planned. AHWELL. Cheers for the review, much appreciated. :D

[Don't be Late]

Pretty decent, had a very clear story & message behind it. Art could have been better, but it certainly wasn't awful. Sound was decent.
All in all, an average rating for a decent flash. Pretty fair ground, in my opinion. Looking forward to more from ya, Bork20

Bork20 responds:

Thank you AnalogByNature,
I appreciate your honest message and i look forward to making more for you to enjoy :)

[fdfdfddf]

Not too bad, a few limbs could have been touched up, but there weren't any sounds, or music involved. If you had those in there, it would have given you another star for sure.
Not much of a story here, aside from a girl who loves to cook, tossing together her favourite dish. Still, it was pleasing to look at - tho it's unfinished without audio.

prozure responds:

it's intro for polish dish tv show. They will add sounds by themselves. It's soooo ALPHA animation. ;)

[Square - Gaming Historia]

This belongs on youtube.
Great documentary, though.

GeekyAnime responds:

Already is!

[Derp.Movie 2]

Keep this shit on youtube.
Sorry. I do find it entertaining, but Newgrounds is more centered for artistic endeavors, and most of the community, specifically the authoritative/moderative folks generally frown upon live action material, unless there's a good amount of animation composited in.
What I think you'd benefit from, is rotoscoping your live action stuff. It would keep its entertaining quality, while staying faithful to what Newgrounds is all about; the arts.

nuFF3 responds:

Actually, I was honestly going to try and do rotoscoping, but that did take me waaaaaaaay to long. But I could try and do it again, only keeping the key frames, passing positions, and a few other frames to keep the framerate smooth. Hmmm.
I'm kinda wondering why they actually let my derp.movies series pass thru' the inspection. probably just a bot making those decisions.

[Pico Day Party 2014]

What a blast!
What does this mean for future meet-ups, though? Someone was telling me Tom's going to work from home now, pretty much, so is there going to be a new office, or is that going to be a place for servers, or was I misled?
Whatever the case may be, we would like to attend next year, and WILL show, provided there's a 2015 meet up. Already have my wife packed.

thinking-man responds:

I definitely remember Tom mentioning a new office in a forum post, but IDK if that means any more parties or whatever.

[Doggie Drama]

Hey! We're from Manitoba!
Where you from, brewstew?
Love these sets, by the way.

brewstew responds:

All the way in poopy Ohio